It all began on a calm and peaceful Monday,
except it was Wednesday and there was radiation
everywhere. If it wasn't for the radiation, things
definately would have been better, but it is no use to
wish for the impossible. Langston was visiting the
elderly prostitute with the fin hands and the laser
beam eyes. "We never go anywhere anymore" she
scolded him. "This is true" he admits in response.
"You frighten the children".

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daniel was a construction worker and he believed
in god. his girlfriend did not believe in god and
she called herself a 'pagan witch'. a lot of people
told daniel that he should not be associating
with this girl, much less dating her, and
daniel agreed. one time they tried to break up, but
it didn't work out.
they are together for life, but they don't know it yet.

READER COMMENTS
1. "I liked the story about Langston better than the story about Daniel. Do more like that."

2. "I thought the Daniel and his girlfriend story was a gripping religious tragedy. I cried".

3. "I could write a better story, but you tell the truth. Keep it real, man".